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I am typically not a person who enjoys thrillers or suspenseful books. The reason being is that I have anxiety. I just don't like being scared or worried knowing what could happen to a character in a book. I know it sounds silly. That being said, I feel this book has a great strong start to it. With a little editing, it should be polished and ready for production. I would love to be sent a copy to edit or further review for you, as I am an up and coming writer myself. I think that the characters were described well and that we had background imagery. Meaning, your scenes were described enough that I felt like I was right there in the book with the people. So I think you did a great job on that and am wanting to read more.