Interesting Writing Style

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I find your descriptions to be blunt but find them very fitting in the book. It helps me picture the characters and scenes without having to read a paragraph-long descriptor, and it is appropriate to the tone of the book. One possible concern is the number of characters being introduced at one time, I find a staggered introduction to be best. However, I don't know how much of a role each character plays so it could be the most suitable for the entire book.

Additionally, I think the cover is absolutely beautiful.