A little amateur but an interesting premise

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I'm very curious where this whole book is going. The beginning chapters read a bit amateurish with backstory seemingly just thrown in while people are wandering around, but I think the idea of it all is interesting and I'd like to see more. There's the possibility of something great here, if the writing can pick up a bit.