More editing required

filled star filled star star unfilled star unfilled star unfilled
sfitz Avatar

By

The premise of the book sounded really interesting, four siblings go to a fortuneteller to hear when they are going to die and it sets the tone for the rest of their lives, which we see as the book unfolds. Unfortunately it doesn't really deliver on the premise the writing is choppy and difficult to follow. The author also seems to have had some difficulty deciding exactly which audience she was aiming for with the book, a few things are a little too descriptive and lets leave it at that.