Tense and atmospheric

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Emotions are running high from the first page of this preview. One sister is struggling with infertility, and has a husband who can't see how much stress their unending pursuit of a child has placed on his wife. The other has three children and a domineering, abusive husband. Now, with their father dead, a woman claiming to be their half-sister has appeared, hoping to meet her father. I think the story has potential, but it may be cursed with a planned publication date in the middle of a tense time.