Tons of Heart but Not for Me

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First, I want to say I couldn't finish this story. I got about half way through before deciding to put it down. When I first read the First Look, I thought the premise was interesting but hoped it would flow better as the story progressed. Maybe I am just not a fan of stories in verse because I couldn't feel for the character. I know her story is a sad one, I know I was supposed to feel for her, and I do for her situation. However, again, maybe because of my preference in writing style, it felt like my emotions couldn't focus on Anna. It felt like shift in point of views and word choices were meant to keep the flow of the verse rather than the flow of the story. I honestly think this might just be a style I have to say I don't connect with. This story could mean the world to someone else.