Cover doesn't due it justice

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Thanks for the chance to read through this excerpt. First things first, the cover does not do this author any justice. It looks like a cover that would be on an autobiography or true crime book put together from stock photos. The writing style is actually really great, the storyline is interesting and engaging, the story is pretty messed up and as a result I'm wanting to know more about the main character and her life, what happens next after the end of the excerpt. The dialogue (both spoken and inner thoughts are shared) is realistic and not stilted. I really liked how the author linked the inner thoughts with the main character's actions. The flow of the story is quite good, the pace is great. I am really motivated to read the rest of the story but highly encourage rethinking the cover because it isn't appealing. I know we shouldn't judge by covers but sometimes it really can help to have something that appeals to the eye.