Building up to be a great story!

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The first twenty pages were really building up to be a great story. I liked the development of the two main characters, Willow and her dad. I am anxious to see how their relationship develops. I am curious to see how her father really makes his money. How is he able to 'sell' the town's history? I am also wondering if Willow will somehow get back into her father's life. It sounds like she has no desire to, but somehow I feel like they will be drawn back together.
I liked how the author quickly developed two main characters right away in the first twenty pages. I feel like I could almost feel the pain Willow was going through. And I felt a bit of drama surrounding her father. What trouble was he going to get them into later on in the story? In the first few pages, the suspense was building!