Seemed Disjointed

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I would have preferred the author got right to the plot concerning Jerry, Howard, and Andrew. The first chapter gave an interesting snippet of the author’s life, but I’m not sure why that was included or where he was taking us by including that. Then I was on the edge of my seat with the part about the two men outside the window with plans to kill the man who was resting on the bed inside. From there the reader was filled in about Andrew, Jerry, and Howard and their company. This part was not done in such a way that it piqued my interest. It seemed like the author was just giving a lot of details, but not making a good story out of it. I lost interest.