Didn't work for me. Not for everybody!

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Really, this one just didn't work for me. The story is good and the history that it combined was interesting, yet there were so many things wrong. For one, the writing was clunky and awkward to read. It pulled me out of the story since it never felt like how someone would actually talk. Next, the main character was, well, not the best. He didn't feel realistic and I couldn't get behind what was going on. Finally, there didn't seem to be a real plot to this. It was given away rather early on, then it felt like there was so much scrambling at straws to make it work. I got about 50 pages in before I realized that, well, it wasn't for me. I didn't like the direction it was heading one bit. Thanks for the opportunity to read this, but a solid DNF for me.