A rather interesting start

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John is at a bar with friends when the partial corpse of another friend is found. It's definitely in need of some more build up since it moves rather quickly. Before we can even get a feel for who these characters are, we're hit with a body found. It's hard to care that much about them so far but I am interested in where the story and the case will go.