Really solidly in-between

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There were good parts and bad parts. I like the story and the intriguing concept of being truly gender fluid via their magic. I did not like how she randomly was totally in control and then at times wasn't? Like, the magic system really needed to be more sussed out. There was no logical order to why her magic wouldn't work sometimes. Like, in other stories it could be stress, weakness, magic needing time to regenerate, but there was absolutely no rhyme or reason as to when her magic would listen or not. Also, I am a vengeful creature, and too many people got away with a gentle pat on the head and an "Okay, don't do that again" for me to thoroughly enjoy the outcomes. But overall, it was a good tale.