Good Beginning then Got Boring

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I thought the beginning had potential with the magic maps and Fatima seemed like an interesting, strong character, but as time went on I started to find her annoying and the whole story line involving the Bird King was disappointing. I actually rolled my eyes when who the Bird King was got revealed. It was just so cliche and none of the characters were very likable. Fatima is bossy and whiny. Hassan is always getting mad about everything. He sleeps with basically every guy but if the guy is interested in Fatima instead he gets over the top jealous. Don't be so man greedy Hassan! Also for a guy who can make places appear by drawing maps, he gets caught a lot more often than he should, he makes a cave to hide in like once in the whole story and then seems to forget he has this ability when need arises.