I have hopes for this author in the future

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The blurb made this book sound so good. I was into the characters and their journey. I was so excited to read the First Impression. I started reading the First Impression and was immediately lost. I had no idea what was going on. I pretty much stayed lost nearly the entire time I was reading. The 'we have publicly broken up but we are still together in reality' thing just confused me. What and why was that? The writing is dialogue heavy. There is not enough sense of place in the scenes. I could not see where the characters were. The world building was lacking in my opinion. I did not understand or like this work very much.