Like Potential More Than Actual

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I think the prologue ended well I can see objectively it will get people attention (it got mines a bit). I like the idea/potential from synopsis than what is on the page. I do not get a sense of suspense from what happened.
Cover: I wonder what it means to the story. I think it gives off a this is a scary story vibe.