Something about the writing just makes the whole story seem stilted. From the first page I felt that we were told too many things about Jane at once to the point of being over descriptive.
I found the cover to be plain and somewhat amateur looking. I also don't like that the authors name is larger than the actual title of the book.
I found the cover to be plain and somewhat amateur looking. I also don't like that the authors name is larger than the actual title of the book.