I was really into it at the beginning, but once Part One started, I was pretty confused, pretty quickly. Why are there so many / ? And why doesn't the sister have a name? It almost feels like there's two different voices that are being woven and intertwined with it.
I can't decide if I would honestly continue reading it after reading the first impression. I already have so many questions and some of them I don't know if they would end up getting answered.