Great start leaves high expectations

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I really enjoyed the initial flow of this story. It started out quickly and grabbed my attention right away. By the time the first couple of pages were done, I already cared what was going to happen to Sparrow.

I also enjoyed the playful banter between Sparrow and Tristan when he was first introduced. I'm already upset that he isn't going to be as perfect as he tries to appear. I look forward to seeing how this relationship develops and how Sparrow will handle the changes.