Seems okay
Well plot development definitely is slow in this first chapter--the reader is quickly immersed in a frantic opening. Given that the book is a thriller, it seems to hold to its promise to contain lots of thrills and plot twists.
Overall, I felt it was "just okay" and I'm not pacing with anticipation for the remainder of the story.
Overall, I felt it was "just okay" and I'm not pacing with anticipation for the remainder of the story.