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This seemed like a shorter than an average “sneak peek” on here but I definitely got the gist of it - it seems really good so far! I really like how it was written, with a what-happened and then a how-it-happened and than back to the what-happened, and the descriptions were great. I also like that it seems realistic, despite the strange circumstances. I cant wait to read what happens next!