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Poorly written smut.

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This book is desperately trying to be the next Fifty Shades of Grey - hot billionaire businessman, hot virgin girl, uncontrollable sex drives, creepy dialogue.

Also the writing is atrocious. Here's some examples:

"I couldn't ignore his hypnotic sensuality, his raw animal attraction."

"Maybe I really should have let someone pop my cherry at some point over the years. Maybe I wouldn't be sitting here in a funk over a man who barely knew I existed."

And my personal favorite: "Christ, I'd love to dig my fingers into the flesh of those perfectly round cheeks while she bounced on my lap and I gave her the best ride of her life."

Um, what the hell? I don't even know what else to say besides this is trash.