Needs sharper editing

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This is a new author for me, so maybe I'm just not used to the writing style. There were many confusing sentences that I had to re-read. The text would greatly benefit from stronger editing.

The tropical setting appealed to me, and it appears to be a decent mystery right from the start. I'm not a fan of strong profanity in books, so this is not for me.