I found this First Look really frustrating. I think all of the chapters were in the appropriate order, but the narrative is so unhinged that I had a lot of trouble following it. I try not to judge these things based on grammar because I know that additional editing is needed, but this one was really tough. The writing is short, choppy, and unfocused. I couldn't connect with the main character because every time it feels like you are getting a little development, he flits to another thought or sleeps with a new woman (who also gets very little character development). I might try to read the finished product when it comes out, just to see what kind of changes they make, but if it's even close to what this First Look was like, it's going to be a struggle just to have it make sense.