Boring?
I hate to just put it bluntly but I was bored reading this first impression. I also got extremely confused.
There isn't any explanation for some of the 'new' terms used. Also, there is a group called the Undeclared (I'm pretty sure in reference to gender) and when they are referred to as a single individual, plural terms are used. I was extremely confused because it sounded as if the single person being talked about was actually a group.
I don't know if there is a better way to reference this person, but it definitely needs some looking into.
There isn't any explanation for some of the 'new' terms used. Also, there is a group called the Undeclared (I'm pretty sure in reference to gender) and when they are referred to as a single individual, plural terms are used. I was extremely confused because it sounded as if the single person being talked about was actually a group.
I don't know if there is a better way to reference this person, but it definitely needs some looking into.