I really enjoyed this excerpt! It seems like this book would be perfect for fans of Tweet Cute by Emma Lord. While the excerpt was short, I already felt emotionally attached to the narrator, and I think it would be interesting to read her story of how she deals with her grandmother's loss. Although the excerpt didn't feature the MC's love interest very much, I think that will be a nice addition to the story, and I'm curious to see how their relationship helps Lari through the grieving process. Overall, a promising start to the novel!