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Too much expository

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The first few pages wasn't interesting because of the exposition. Most paragraphs in this excerpt has sentences that are just too long. I hope the writer would do something about it. But I do like how the excerpt ends, it does catch my interest a bit. But sorry, this book just isn't for me