Need to know where this leads....

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First off, I love the bright colors of the cover. It contradicts the dark story. I found the story intriguing and I want to know want really happened on that vacation. One thing that I was not a fan of was some of the writing. Sometimes the family was referred to as "the husband" or "the wife." I found that the change of grammatical person pulled me out of the story a bit.