Needs a new cover!

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My first impression of a book is always the cover, and this one is awful! It has too many sections, too many lines, and too many words, as well as a boring font. Having said that, the story itself is intriguing, although there needs to be more character development. This first section of the book reads like a prologue of the book to come. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops.