Outstanding opening! Made me stop and think about the scene. I was caught up in the action. Great nightmarish details, especially on the senses, along with a story that took off with rapid speed.
Page two describes in great detail of what went on.
On page three a great show of surprise lit up his face as he stared into the eyes.
Can't wait to read the rest of the book to see how it all comes together.
Page two describes in great detail of what went on.
On page three a great show of surprise lit up his face as he stared into the eyes.
Can't wait to read the rest of the book to see how it all comes together.