Something feels off about the story so far as what the preview shows but I cannot pin point it and I've read the preview over a couple of times. At least the language and tone is not sugar coated and held back. It is definitely to the point and explicit compared to the other lines of books published by this publisher. I think a longer preview would be better to make a proper judgement whether this book is a buy or borrow first type of read if the reader wants to continue reading this at all.