Felt overly proper
The concept of the book is different, I actually think it would be a really good story. I just felt a sort of detachment to the story because of the writing style. It felt very proper, similar to Agatha Christie, and books of that time. I found it hard to relate and get drawn in because of that. It started out slow, probably building up to the story. It has potential though, once it gets going. The cover certainly makes it seem like it will be a cute story.