When I started reading the first look, my first thought was, "what the hell?", because I didn't really understand the thing with the reporter and then the story shifts to Anne, which left me even more confused.
Then the story progresses from Anne's perspective and that is the point I actually got interested. Or I should say I got interested in the peculiar way of describing things. And just when I got cozy with her voice, it shifted to Natalie's.
There is nothing wrong with multiple POV but I feel like switching too soon is bound to make you uninterested.
But I kept reading anyway and I reflected after going through it. I think I like it because of how the story is narrated. And then I got engrossed in the story. And I just want to know what the accident was all about.
Then the story progresses from Anne's perspective and that is the point I actually got interested. Or I should say I got interested in the peculiar way of describing things. And just when I got cozy with her voice, it shifted to Natalie's.
There is nothing wrong with multiple POV but I feel like switching too soon is bound to make you uninterested.
But I kept reading anyway and I reflected after going through it. I think I like it because of how the story is narrated. And then I got engrossed in the story. And I just want to know what the accident was all about.