The prologue is enough to grab you and make you want to know exactly how this woman ends up in that position. And reading more I do want to know what happens next. However I was kind of hit with some logistical issues. I've never heard of the father being forced out after delivery? I've never given birth but as far as I know it's not uncommon for the father to stay the night with the mother. I know that that was added for conflict but it just seemed like a more realistic thing could've happened for that.