Mystery! Right at the commencement of the story. Yeah! My curiosity has been aroused. powerful plot so far, along with powerful suspense. Was it an accident? Or was it attempted murder? Who will be the number one suspect?
Cohan Marah was the one who found his dad, or was he? He did not look sad or act as though he was in shock when he saw him lying on the floor. So, as the mystery deepened, what really happened in Part 1, chapter one? This story was right up my alley. I love a good mystery and love to try and help solve them.
Shawn Smucker has that style of writing that adds intrigue and will cause the reader to think and how to react to what is going on and what is about to happen next.
Cohan Marah was the one who found his dad, or was he? He did not look sad or act as though he was in shock when he saw him lying on the floor. So, as the mystery deepened, what really happened in Part 1, chapter one? This story was right up my alley. I love a good mystery and love to try and help solve them.
Shawn Smucker has that style of writing that adds intrigue and will cause the reader to think and how to react to what is going on and what is about to happen next.