Meandering story

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Things are just starting to pick up as this excerpt ends; I'm curious to see how the dual timelines interact. We get seemingly random pictures of his childhood, largely revolving around a church setting, intertwined with the modern timeline of his father's death (maybe). A skilled storyteller could bring them together, and I hope that's what this author is.