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I think the cover is really confusing at first glance; of course, it probably becomes clearer of the meaning once you read the story. The summary does not grab my attention initially, for some reason it seems jumbled. I don’t care for the stylistic editing / writing choices in the excerpt, honestly it would be a DNF or wouldn’t try it in the first place BUT I think there is a huge target audience for this (just not me)