Has a lot of promise
Upon reading the first look, I feel that the story has a lot of promise. It gives vague references to the past that I’m sure will be explained throughout the story. It kind of sets you up at an end and feels like it’s going to work it’s way backwards. This layout strategy is definitely written well enough to have me intrigued and want to read further. I look forward to seeing where this story takes out most compelling main character.