I really liked the beginning where the kids find a mysterious body and I hope the story goes back to that soon! The story moves away from that scene so quickly, and so much happens in Chapter one itself that I had a hard time keeping up. What was in the past, what was happening in the present, are all the events happening at the same time and they're going to meet up eventually?
I also noticed there were references to people Jack Warr has worked with in the past. But since I didn't read the first book, I didn't get the references. It would have been nice to have a short sentence or two after each reference to explain the context and so the reader can understand the relationship Jack has with each person.
I also noticed there were references to people Jack Warr has worked with in the past. But since I didn't read the first book, I didn't get the references. It would have been nice to have a short sentence or two after each reference to explain the context and so the reader can understand the relationship Jack has with each person.