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Not doing it

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While I made it through the entire first impression, I did not like it at all. Julia comes across as whiny, wanting to stand up for herself or get out there but at the same time, finding every excuse possible to stay in the rut she's in. You can picture everything being said with a sigh and a slight eye roll, like, "Woe is me, my life is so horrible." I also didn't like the structure of the dialogue.