The story itself is definitely interesting. I mean, it's someone's personal story so I'm not going to critique what they went through.
However, I do think there are some parts that need to be edited for a better story flow. Sometimes, especially during conversations, there are just too many words depicting what happened.
However, I do think there are some parts that need to be edited for a better story flow. Sometimes, especially during conversations, there are just too many words depicting what happened.