A cute premise

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There were a couple paragraphs in a row in the first couple of pages that were all composed of the same, short-length sentences and they just threw me out of the story completely. I was interested enough in the premise, but struggled to get back into it. I'm a fan of the female character. Her backstory seems intriguing.

I like the cover a lot! She looks like a Disney princess.