Doesn’t flow smoothly

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I liked the beginning of this story and thought it would be interesting but it seemed to fall apart, at least in this excerpt. Just as I was wondering what happened with the murder of Julian and hoping for the backstory about it, the author switched gears to a prison romance. Maybe this affair becomes part of the main story down the line but I would abandon the book at this point.