Disappointed
I wanted to like this book. But the writing style just did not draw me in. Being completely transparent I didn't finish it. it might have gotten better. But in my Experience hooks that can't hold my attention in the 1st 50 patience in her worth my time. I wish that I would have been more showing and less telling. I didn't really care about the characters. The preview seems really promising. But I just didn't deliver And I have the other books that I'd rather spend my time reading. The book read like a video game script. I don't have any more to say but I need to hit the word limit. So this is just extra to fill the 700 character quota. Wish I could have just summed it up with what I wrote earlier. This seems like a waste of the readers time. I had no clue 700 characters would feel so.stinking long. Holy Hannah. Will it never end. I just want pints for the paged I suffered through.