Slow Start

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I love a good opening line and a boundless, unforeseen storm claiming "one life, two hearts, and six destinies" is a great way to open up a story, but the prologue went downhill from there. It felt like Cervantes was trying too hard to be original. The third person POV feels a little awkwardly done and makes it hard for me to feel invested in the story. Still, the premise sounds interesting enough that I'd consider reading Flirting with Fate.