I think this sounds like a great story! From what I've read so far, I just want to read more and see where things go. I really like the third-person narration style, overall I like the writing style, and I think the author does a very good job of writing in a way that isn't awkward to read, which isn't always the case for such young adult books. Also, kind of small, but I LOVE the star graphics in the little blurb at the beginning of the preview!