It's fine

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This is an interesting concept and I don't dislike the narrator's voice. But I really dislike it when authors belabor the details of what everyone is wearing and pretend it's real character insight. Veronica's hair won't stay straightened and that means she's a _rebel_. It seems like the story might have decent bones but I don't think there's enough to hold me.