First of all, I'd just like to say that I am such a sucker for a great opening line. And this one started with quite a doozy!
The first thing that grabbed me after the opening line is how lush the descriptions of the setting and characters are. Even after only a few lines I could feel myself falling into the story.
I'm really excited to read more!
The first thing that grabbed me after the opening line is how lush the descriptions of the setting and characters are. Even after only a few lines I could feel myself falling into the story.
I'm really excited to read more!