I’m going to go ahead and admit that I didn’t read this whole excerpt. I got through 9 pages and called it. By far the worst sample on this website, from the amateur cover to the overly purple trying-to-hard prose. And the offensive description of the nurse. And the I’m-old-but filled-with-testosterone-so-I-just-can’t-help-myself-from-lusting-after-young-girls. I’m not reading a whole book of it. Utterly pretentious.
The premise *might* have enticed me to read this, but it’s so badly written that I want to through my device across the room. And maybe enlist the Men in Black to erase the memory of me having read any of it.
The premise *might* have enticed me to read this, but it’s so badly written that I want to through my device across the room. And maybe enlist the Men in Black to erase the memory of me having read any of it.