While I understand that some like this train-of-thought writing style, it does not appeal to me when the content is so disjointed and chaotic. Train-of-thought usually follows more of a linear style. The premise of the story was interesting and as a medical professional, I am intrigued to read how the author will explain the death/murder of Dr. S. On a positive note, I felt like I was at Skip's party. The descriptions clearly painted the atmosphere, although the sentences were laborious to read.