I enjoyed the tone but I didn’t enjoy the writing or the topic. And what is that cover about? It looks like something someone drew in a notebook in the middle of ignoring a lecture or meeting. I like the idea of the topic but I was so thrown off by the writing. I don’t understand whether this is an essay, a story, or something else entirely. None of it makes any sense. I really don’t know what else to write about for this book. It was odd and I could t figure out the point or the intended audience. I thought at first it was academic but then it felt too much like a mess. I would like the story for something written by someone who writes surreal fiction that takes the reader on a strange and wonderful journey. Also the topic is important but if the writing is to odd it defeats the purpose. Im not sure this topic should be confusing. It should be a slap in the face.